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Tear Gas
Contributed by
justintears
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Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 07:25:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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...Can't find the words
to ignite this life again
and give it a meaningless purpose.
All this hopelessness.
I see it in every star that couldn't shine
and every river that cleansed my sins.
She couldn't have cared less,
I couldn't have loved more.
I pause for a breath,
just to see every promise fail.
This sorrow's understood...
...it's for her that I cry...
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justintears
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2005-11-02 19:25:20]
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Re: Tear Gas
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 07:56:33 PM AEST
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well i do understand this write alot good flow
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Re: Tear Gas
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 08:53:08 PM AEST
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So much pain and sadness in your words. A very well written piece of poetry. It's amazing how so few words can say so much. Keep penning down your emotions. You do it with style. Well done.
*hugs*
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Re: Tear Gas
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by Kie-Kie on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 09:22:01 PM AEST
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Oh Justin I hope your heart mends soon *huggles* I'm sorry to hear there's someoen treating you so horribly
We love you!
great write though *hugs*
Love ya,
~Kiela~ |
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