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pathetic state of mine
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 07:15:00 PM in AEST
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alone and patheic is the way i feel today
i told you of love but she walked away
another fine mess an uncomfortable stare
now knowing the truth i really dont care
why is it i meant to be always alone
6 years and counting always silent in my home
she states she has feelings but she is to busy to know
she has a boyfriend didnt that show
they weird way she looked when i threw out my heart
my feelings like a board stuck with a dart
they flirt and they tease but when i make my plan
they play with there hair and say they have a man
this is my final scream of this ugly day
the feeling inside im growing up grey
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Re: pathetic state of mine
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by evilfairy on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 09:57:22 PM AEST
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Another good poem...
you have great way of putting your words down clearly and yet still poetically.
but your story sides like the kind of girl my sister is...
it must suck. they need to understand it' not all games on both sides of the fence. |
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Re: pathetic state of mine
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by being_oflight on
Saturday, 7th October 2006 @ 11:10:39 PM AEST
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good poem, i like how you word your feelings.
sucks though, know how you feel |
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