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Fallen
Contributed by
senorwoohoo
on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 10:40:00 PM in AEST
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I hear a voice in my head whisper,
to calm my angry ways.
Softly but still firmly speaking,
of new and better days.
The water level lowers now,
of which I'm drowning in.
My head is almost at the surface,
my life starts to begin.
Already born but not yet lived,
I push through the weakening wall.
My eyes now see, my ears do work,
but yet again I fall.
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senorwoohoo
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2003-01-21 22:40:00]
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Re: Fallen
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 10:54:32 PM AEST
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| Outstanding ....sometimes it seems we are destined for failure no matter how hard we try. But in the end the effort pays off. Excellent write. Rakerman1999 |
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Re: Fallen
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by roisin on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 11:25:16 PM AEST
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well said...great write!
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Re: Fallen
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 03:40:18 AM AEST
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| Awesome ... wonderful write ... short but very powerful. |
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Re: Fallen
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by Chrissie on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 05:06:26 PM AEST
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Outstanding writing ..
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