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hear violins sing
Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 03:19:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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You pulled me back in!
Played my heart with a string
I'm folded in two
While i hear violins sing
You caught me again!
Placed me back in that cage
I'm lonely again
Back on this black stage
You trapped me again!
With your smiles and greed
I'm here in the sun
Feeding you shade that you need
Let me out of this cage,
I'm sick of your seeds!
I don't need this stage,
to know my wing bleeds!
I hope that i starve,
at least i would be!
My heart's not to carve
but it does tend to bleed...
dw
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Re: hear violins sing
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by ever1der on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 04:49:56 PM AEST
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yeah I hear the all-too-familiar sounds of co-dependancy. It's hard too fight .. I really think it's another addictive behavior. I've been to so many of the meetings .. I still see myself getting into the behavior.
Nice write! keep pennin' (or pencil, or keyboard LOL) |
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Re: hear violins sing
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by sride686 on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 05:06:30 PM AEST
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Very nice write and it flows really good
with emotion and really draws the reader
in. It’s good to see your still writing and
your writes are still good. Its been awhile
sense I’ve been on YPDC but I thought I
would come back and post a few writes
and see who’s still here. I enjoyed this
write and I’ll try and read more when I get
the time. Only two months left in Iraq
almost home. Take care….Steve |
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Re: hear violins sing
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 03:51:09 PM AEST
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dw u can always produce an outstanding write time and time again. Alot of emotions pour out from ur write. Well done and keep penning down those emotions of urs.
*hugs*
sue |
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