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The Tears Won't Come
Contributed by
lost_chadow
on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 03:06:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I'm at the barrel of a gun
a friend's time has come
but the tears won't come
what's begun is begun
and the road that the world's headed for
is a wild one
but the tears won't come.
Momma's gettin older
brotha's gettin bolder
I feel like at the end
i'll be the only surviving oe
but the tears won't come.
Peolple die every day
kids killin kids just to play
and Africans, once noble, are leaving their brothers
dead in the hay
children are destroying themselves for fun
but the tears won't come.
I'm dying inside
I feel it
but can't repeal it
'cause the game's got me dry hung
even for myself, the tears just won't come.
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lost_chadow
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2005-11-02 15:06:09]
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Re: The Tears Won't Come
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 03:15:23 PM AEST
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interesting write like the line got me dry hung
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Re: The Tears Won't Come
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 03:28:26 PM AEST
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A sad, but very interesting piece of poetry you have presented us with. Welcome back. Hope to read more of your work soon.
*hugs*
Sue |
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Re: The Tears Won't Come
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by honeychild8915 on
Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 06:52:53 PM AEST
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| the tears wont come huh??? well i hate to tell you but after reading this, the tears did come. almost made me cry!!! ='[ |
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Re: The Tears Won't Come
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by lost_chadow on
Monday, 12th December 2005 @ 02:26:33 PM AEST
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| awww, don't cwy. |
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