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Night is still young
Contributed by
remote
on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 02:21:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Sounds
of the sea
drowned under
'Dire Straits'
Dancers waving their hands
as if they'd take off
any moment
grounded they remained
Lights flashing
to the music
Insects caught
in the beams,
glittering diamonds
on fire
'so far away'
One more shot
of tequila
the night is still young
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remote
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Re: Night is still young
(User Rating: 1 ) by Dark_and_Cold on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 02:57:28 PM AEST (User
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Only one more shot? :P
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Re: Night is still young
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 03:15:05 PM AEST (User
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Lovely imagery......I'm in!!
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Re: Night is still young
(User Rating: 1 ) by secretwind on
Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 01:48:13 PM AEST (User
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nice.....got me dreaming |
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Re: Night is still young
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 03:50:41 AM AEST (User
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I'll have a margerita.
smiles,
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Re: Night is still young
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 04:37:53 AM AEST (User
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I really like this one. Thanks for bringing us to the concert. Very enjoyable indeed.
Tim
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