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There's Nothing You Can Do
Contributed by
PrincessJen
on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 10:01:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I can't remember now
What happened
Why or how
Answers unknown
Of the pain I've shown
Time has erased
But tears still run down my face
When I try to bring myself back to that place
The pain is too real
I want to let go....
Want to heal....want to feel...want to grow
Want everyone to know
That I'm hurting inside
And theres nothing you can do
But watch me go down this emotional roller coaster ride
And there is nothing you can say
That can ease my pain
Or make it go away
Only time can tell
Only time can break the spell
Copyright ©
PrincessJen
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2005-11-02 10:01:23]
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Re: There's Nothing You Can Do
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by Rogue on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 10:46:25 AM AEST
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| I'm very sorry that something so horrible had to happen to you. Even though I don't know what it was, I assure you I understand your pain. The poem was great. I hope you can find someone to help you cope with this problem. Great poem. |
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Re: There's Nothing You Can Do
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by Adrianna on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 11:16:42 AM AEST
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| Your writing style is wonderful. I love the poem. I can feel what you are feeling. Keep writing! |
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Re: There's Nothing You Can Do
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 12:50:22 PM AEST
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| What a touching poem I can truly feel what you feel here! Christina |
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Re: There's Nothing You Can Do
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by MsCrys on
Thursday, 6th July 2006 @ 06:15:22 PM AEST
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Excellent work here. All I can say is that you're correct...time can break the spell. You WILL get through this. In the words of the late 2pac, "Keep your head up" :)
~*MsCrys*~ |
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