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Reflections of Love
Contributed by
sride686
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Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 06:35:08 AM in AEST
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A glimmer of light
It’s a glimmer of lust
A need for her love
To give me that rush
Heart still pounding
From the first time we kissed
How many years passed
And you’re still my true wish
Future and present
Together in past
Together forever
Our love will last
Clouds so gloomy
Separation in time
I’ll think of your voice
And remember your mine
The touch of you skin
Ecstasy in my soul
I give you my heart
For you make me whole
Shadows of love
That lay on my soul
To forever remember
The love that we hold
~Steve~
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sride686
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Re: Reflections of Love
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by LolaWhite on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 10:08:54 AM AEST
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My Love,
This is one of your most beautiful writes to me. I love the flow, the use of imagery with the shadow and the light. I love that you show the world your love for me. I can't wait for you to come home. I miss you and I love you more each day. This poem is definantly frameable! I love it. Thank you.
Kisses,
Your Lea-Ann xox |
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Re: Reflections of Love
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 10:33:28 AM AEST
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Awwww what a beautiful write for your sweety.
And long time i have not seen you here.
anyways great job Steve.
hugs |
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Re: Reflections of Love
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 12:49:24 PM AEST
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| So loving & touching hope for a safe return to her! Christina |
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Re: Reflections of Love
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by GurlyTye on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 03:59:59 PM AEST
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| Yet another wonderfull write my dear friend... it has been awhile since i have had the pleasure of reading your work... passionate as ever... i am glad to see that your work has a brighter feel to it. |
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Re: Reflections of Love
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by sprinter27 on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 04:04:17 PM AEST
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aww, steve, that's really sweet!! i really respect and like how much you love your wife!! i wish there were more guys in this world like you! i liked this write, steve, it was well written, and i hope your wife knows what a lucky person she is to have you in love with her and in her life!! great write, keep up the great write!!!
~sprints
p.s. the best of luck given in getting home safely!!! |
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Re: Reflections of Love
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by sick_n_twisted on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 07:51:07 PM AEST
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how sweet !! i love the dlow of this poem every word fits perfectly nice write !! i hope you return safely home to your family
Dee, |
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Re: Reflections of Love
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 08:48:27 PM AEST
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| A beautiful write for your beautiful wife. The love for your wife Lea-Ann is ever so clear and evident. May you be back home safely in her arms real soon. |
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Re: Reflections of Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 03:53:11 PM AEST
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Steve, beautiful write, prayers be with you and your wife...family...
RLD |
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