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right or wrong

Contributed by crazy on Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 06:19:07 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



right or wrong
what do i do
your grown im not
how do we ell them
how we feel about each other
is it right to have done that
or is it rong to have done that
right or wrong
to say what i have
or what ive done
is it right
for me to be the way i am
will you accept me
i think it wrong
because im me and your you
you say im pretty beautiful and hot
but i hate the way i look
you say im skinny
i see my self as fat
is it wrong to hate my self
is it right that you like me
and i like you
is it right or wrong
to be ourselves
and not get caught
or do we let these feelings
just stay dormit and never give
them a chance
is it wrong for us to try
can it be right
will i ever be truly happy
i was in love but broke
my own heart
is it right for me to move on
it feels right but i and you
know it can never be
for you see our ages are not legal
if it were right
then no one would ever fight
over me or you
it is wrong for us
right now
is it right or wrong
to be scared of
how i feel about you
you say you like me for a long time
i say the same
but is it truly true
right or wrong
to tell people what we did or will do
please tell me if it is
RIGHT OR WRONG?




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Re: right or wrong (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 10:54:03 AM AEST
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Kinda sad .
It seems this person disrepect you.
not good.it looked to me like its wrong.
good write

hugs


Re: right or wrong (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 05:01:26 PM AEST
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I read his version and I think he is very sincere and honest when he says he loves you. Sometimes age difference can make the sitaution you're in very awkward. Goodluck and I hope things work out for you two.
*hugs*
Sue


Re: right or wrong (User Rating: 1 )
by romance_pyro on Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 11:05:08 PM AEST
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I wish i knew the answer you seek. This is gonna be to long ill just write a poem about it...




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