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Rupture

Contributed by EndEformEtrancE on Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 09:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Forced to stumble over unseen monologues,

In a tunnel moist with perspiration.

Dark, dank and inhospitable,

Struggling towards the light


This light's still out of reach


Floating in this amniotic sea,

A brief psychosis passes over.

I tear at my surroundings,

The light grows brighter still.


My retinas develop quickly,

As my world contracts and I'm crushed.

I lash out at my atmosphere,

The light envelops me.


In this place I've incubated for too long

I remove every cell and every tissue

I destroy my memories of this environment

I convulse and shun this cord that restricts me


I can't stand this

I didn't want this

I can't stand this

I didn't want this


In this place I've incubated for too long

I remove every cell and every tissue

I destroy my memories of this environment

I convulse and shun this cord that restricts me


Drowning in this anguish I contradict myself,

I rip my own flesh as I spin,

Biting the boundaries that conceal me

Images of hatred shoot through this womb


I tremble and shake for one final time,

And stare at the passage behind me.

This torment is finally through

The light disappears from view.




Copyright © EndEformEtrancE ... [ 2003-01-21 21:20:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Rupture (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 08:04:20 AM AEST
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damn, this is powerful stuff - i can imagine hearing it too, you gotta love songs that aren't just about lost love and sk8er boi's!


Re: Rupture (User Rating: 1 )
by Jacquelynne on Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 11:29:34 AM AEST
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hey, did you cut a cd? if so I want one!




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