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Insanity
Contributed by
fireydragon23
on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 12:09:49 AM in AEST
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Control of insanity,
is taken in vain.
A loss of his loved one,
left him with pain.
A mind of his own,
a heart that is free.
A man with a knife,
now drops to one knee.
He looks at the stars,
then looks at the ground.
The man that he stabbed,
will never be found.
He sits and he ponders,
these thoughts without care.
The four walls of his prison,
will always be there.
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fireydragon23
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2005-11-02 00:09:49]
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Re: Insanity
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by sick_n_twisted on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 01:01:37 AM AEST
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I know how you feel my friend passed away and i miss him like crazy I loved how you wrote this part
Control of insanity,
is taken in vain.
A loss of his loved one,
left him with pain.
the rhymes are really good
loved this write good one |
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Re: Insanity
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by little_things on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 03:06:43 PM AEST
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| great rhymes. i really enjoyed this poem |
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Re: Insanity
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 02:34:15 AM AEST
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| This one's very cool too!!! You've got great talent! |
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