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Liaison Of The Heart...
Contributed by
eternal_dreamer
on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 10:04:54 PM in AEST
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I'm a liaison of your heart
An amorist who adores
To kiss your luscious lips
And to love you forever more
Like an occult dream
I armour you in my arms
Inexpressible desires
Ring euphoria's alarms
Passion burns ardently
With every heated glance
As you feel me with intimacy
I start to do my exotic dance
My love for you is fervent
Sensual desires need capture
Ecstasy fills open mid air
Time stands still in rapture
With tranquil pleasure
Our hearts sing a song
As we fulfil our ardour
I know with you I belong...
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Re: Liaison Of The Heart...
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 10:25:29 PM AEST
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| So beautiful this was & so discriptive! It shows true feeling. Christina |
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Re: Liaison Of The Heart...
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by ever1der on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 10:33:41 PM AEST
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| Bravo! to who ever inspired this .. great! |
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Re: Liaison Of The Heart...
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 01:13:47 AM AEST
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The headline has spoken of such sadness...
sadness of which I did not know-
...an illness??
Blest are they who have you.. to send
these words..
But moreover..blessed are YOU..my friend.
I've a library of emotion for all you've been to me-
and will be-
All My Thoughts Prayers and Love to You Sue-
Your Friend, Fan and Confidant-
and as always...
Billy
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Re: Liaison Of The Heart...
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 02:08:39 AM AEST
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*dances*
I'll bet I know who inspired this ; )
Thank him, will you...? I am so happy you posted something new. Your poetry is always inspiring to read Sue, and this one has some heartfelt and beautiful thoughts in it. Any man has it made to have your heart : )
Just for you, I'll break my hugging ban...lol
*big, huge hugs*
Scorp ; ) |
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Re: Liaison Of The Heart...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 10:49:04 PM AEST
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aw, Susie Q!! Glad you decided to stay. And so glad
that I get to experience another one of your beautiful
poems. This was amazing. I love the place you are
writing from right now. Heartwarming. I'm happy for
ya sweetie!
*huggles loads!*
~Breezy |
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Re: Liaison Of The Heart...
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 01:16:16 AM AEST
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Dearest Sue:
This poem helps me to feel you are going to be fine.. keep the bond.. be it Jesus or a lover... peace be with you my friend... Huggs...I feel as though I have known you forever, and the way you write is like you have been forever.. you definantly have been, even before we met..my blessing received is that when I prayed and typed in take me to a christian site for poetry, God brought me here, and this was a prayer... in order to meet you in our lifetime.. I pray for you all the time, both of us battle some hard times with our health.. peace sister.. in Jesus name.. I pray..amen
RL |
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Re: Liaison Of The Heart...
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 03:57:59 PM AEST
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| wonderful write Sue as always ,,a hot write from a hot writer,,I loved it ,you are a star ,,hugs you me |
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Re: Liaison Of The Heart...
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 08:51:56 PM AEST
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This is an awesome poem.
Take care.
Scott |
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Re: Liaison Of The Heart...
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by ChibiMiroku on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 11:35:48 PM AEST
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| Well done, as always! :D |
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Re: Liaison Of The Heart...
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by DreamPoetess on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 03:51:23 AM AEST
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I must say this is better than any chocolate I have eaten:> I am so happy you wrote this poem, and may the person who inspired you be your friend forever:> Beatiful songful lyrics:> Is songful a word:>
Meagan:> |
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Re: Liaison Of The Heart...
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by Shade_ on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 09:59:58 AM AEST
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Hmm
Please, forgive my honestly here.
But this simply did not flow. You had the passion, the means to fly.
And yet, I felt as though I was reading cut up words.
Your vocabulary is astounding but, you fall back on it too much here. And that could cause the reading to scratch their head and wondering what that means.
You have passion… learn to fly
(and thank you very much for the lovely comment in which you presented me with. It is ever so appreciated.)
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Re: Liaison Of The Heart...
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by brew on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 12:26:56 AM AEST
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To the SWEET lady WHO always says, Im the sweet one.! NOPE....................Your the ONE with the heart, Im JUST me.! I know deep down who has the talent.and ITS YOU! I just write from the eternal heart of Dayna.....You write from the eternal soul of All.! So glad to have you posting again.
Hugs and love,
Brew~ |
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