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Wonder...
Contributed by
evilfairy
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Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 09:30:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Wonder…
What you’re doing now
If you’re surviving, how?
Wonder…
If you think of me
Separated by this sea
Wonder…
If your pain has faded
Or is the love now jaded?
Wonder…
If she ever suspected
How she was close to being rejected
Wonder…
If you really meant it
Were your words legit?
Wonder…
Will we meet again
Or is that thought insane?
Wonder…
Are we still close friends
Or is this a breach we can never mend?
MW 02.11.05
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evilfairy
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2005-11-01 21:30:44]
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Re: Wonder...
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by ebooibo on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 09:34:44 PM AEST
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| PRETTY GOOD DO U HAVE MORE |
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Re: Wonder...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 09:44:08 PM AEST
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Very nice write, re-occuring questions a lot of people ask. Great Write.
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Re: Wonder...
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 10:11:05 PM AEST
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A re-occuring question one tends to ask themselves after the above mentioned situation. I like your style of writing and the way you presented this to your reader.
I hope you can still remain friends. Goodluck.
*hugs*
sue |
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Re: Wonder...
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by Lashing_Tongue on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 11:47:12 PM AEST
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In my experiences, ex-lovers make poor friends.
Best Wishes,
Jackie |
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Re: Wonder...
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by evilfairy on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 12:23:40 AM AEST
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| yeah...but what if you were best friends first? |
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Re: Wonder...
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by little_things on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 03:02:57 PM AEST
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| i like your style. I hate when you break up with someone who is a close friend and you have to give up that friendship. |
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