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I Die in Good Luck and GoodByes!
Contributed by
MajesticPoet
on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 08:46:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I'll be the ghost inside this house
You can see the whispers from my mouth
I'll keep my distance from you
Holding back all you thought you knew
I tried to keep these thoughts inside
While letting go I'll say to you,
Good luck,
And GoodBye! Watching again as I Die!
Its the taste of air that we breathe
Its the life that we all taste
Its the world we should have known
Its my heart its now stone
You cant hear me
You cant see me
You dont know me
We were never meant to be
And im calling out your name today silently
And im hoping, that we will be the same, like before
Is it over, or can these vacant hearts succeed?
Lets pretend that we are real
I wear my scars on my sleeve
All for what I fear
The words I choose
It makes it difficult for me to sleep
Cast my memories aside
Fall back on this life I hide
My hope will die
On the day the moon engulfs the sky
I tried to keep these thoughts inside
While letting go I'll say to you,
Good luck,
And GoodBye! God they are watching me again as I DIE!
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MajesticPoet
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2005-11-01 20:46:01]
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Re: I Die in Good Luck and GoodByes!
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 08:51:40 PM AEST
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I did, I really enjoyed this one. Very emotion felt. Great write.
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Re: I Die in Good Luck and GoodByes!
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by MajesticPoet on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 08:54:41 PM AEST
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Wow thank you. That was the fastest I have ever recieved a comment upon posting a poem.. I appreciate your comment and am glad you liked it...
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