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whore
Contributed by
weepingprophet
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Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 08:41:58 PM in AEST
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cut me to the core
i've become the whole world's whore
leave what you will
i'll deny you in this pill
soft in my flesh
i'll give you nothing but my best
i'm dirty but you don't care
i'm weak inside too dead to be scared
i'd say "i want to die"
but it's only monday
seven days from now
i'll sit in church and wonder...how?
how did i trade my soul
for a life of lust and no control?
cut me to the core
i've always wanted to be the world's whore
leave me if you will
i deny everything with this pill
i'd say" i want to die"
but it's only wednesday
don't ask me and don't expect
the answer to be yes
i'd scream until my lungs collapsed
i'd trade in my future, erase all my past
you'll always be the one
the one....
to cut me to the core
demand me to be your whore
you'll leave me with what you will
you can't take away my sacred pill
i'd say "i want to die"
but that would be a lie
it's only saturday
and i'm dead anyway
you'll never be anything more
you pathetic
repulsive
useless
whore
this is a dedication to myself.~weepingprophet
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weepingprophet
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Re: whore
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 08:44:41 PM AEST
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No one, should think of themselves that way. Everyone's amazing, in there own unique way, and while that can be debated, I'm sure your wrong, don't be so negative towards yourself. Great write, hope things get better.
-Cassy |
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Re: whore
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by weepingprophet on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 08:54:02 PM AEST
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in saying this is a dedication to myself i don't mean that these words are "about" me. I mean that i dedicate this to myself as a reminder of what worth is. It reminds me of all the things that people can endure and overcome even from within themselves. "whore" is something more than a prostitute, i look at it with many layers and many interpretations. Everytime i read this, i see what i intended when i wrote it, and that is something i doubt any of its readers will take from it. Never the less i hope you all understand that this isn't a negative write and its definately not self demeaning or durrogative.
many thanks,
weepingprophet
~you are the emptiness that fulfills me, the silence that satisfies. forever, i will deny you~weepingprophet |
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Re: whore
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 09:08:13 PM AEST
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| man, the person in this poem is one very self distructive soul, but none the less it kept me reading. Good job |
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Re: whore
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by evilfairy on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 09:13:06 PM AEST
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Tragic that you mean it about you, however reading your additional comment has relieved me somewhat - but i've read the poem for what it was meant, i think :)
like your poem immensely...i love the different concepts you've put in it...i love how you go back to the pill over and over again...and the whole days of the week thing...
it's all very cool :) |
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Re: whore
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by Lashing_Tongue on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 11:53:26 PM AEST
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Hmm...you should call me sometime...
Ha, no, I'm just kidding...Very inappropriate I know. I liked your poem though, very sobering and powerful, especially at the ending where you reverse perspectives to deliever the final blow.
Best Wishes,
Jackie |
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