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Love wouldn't let us fall
Contributed by
Oceandreamer
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Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 08:11:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Love will show us the way, don’t listen to what they say, Love wouldn’t let us fall. Take a walk with me, they’ll never find us… Come with me, we can only loose our way …get lost in our own world, our world of love. We’ll find our way back …even fairytales come to an end. If this isn’t perfect, then what is love… If this isn’t right …I don’t want to know right from wrong. If this love a crime …I’m guilty as sin. If this isn’t right, then what are we feeling …what is this feeling between us tonight. If we are not high on love… then why are we touching the ceiling. If this isn’t everything, If this isn’t real …don’t wake me from this dream. I’d rather have nothing …nothing at all. Take my hand, love wouldn’t let us fall.
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Re: Love wouldn't let us fall
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 08:30:45 PM AEST
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well as the first poem i read all day its not bad at all
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Re: Love wouldn't let us fall
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 08:42:21 PM AEST
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Very sweet, I loved it, it's a great feeling, and you describe it well. I enjoyed reading it. Great Write. Can't wait for more.
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Re: Love wouldn't let us fall
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 09:03:55 PM AEST
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So beautifully written. I like the way you've presented this one. I enjoyed reading your poem. I hope to read some more. Keep up the great work.
*hugs*
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Re: Love wouldn't let us fall
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by Tatikaze on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 09:08:15 PM AEST
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True love wont let us fall......But corrupt love will be the death of us all!!! Loved the poem
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