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Cramp in my Mind
Contributed by
Vampire_Slander
on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 06:45:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Childhood dreams fading into blackness
a monument of half accomplished goals set before me
I'm following in the foot steps of despair
I've become an addict of tragedy
my striving for something has made me a slave
nothing shall even captivate me again
I shed no tears over my ill fate
I have not that many left to spare
I'm burning with heartache
these steps I've taken forward have made me plunge
I cannot sleep easy on this night
work shall take eternity to finish
cold sweat in a land of my own creation
devoid of darkness and pain
free of the filth of humanity
these barriers will not break so easily
save me from my inner self
my mind has been handicapped with life
with each drab day I lose myself
I need to be set free
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2005-11-01 18:45:28]
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Re: Cramp in my Mind
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by VampryssCherry on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 09:07:59 PM AEST
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Very dark. I like it a lot. It kind of made me think. Keep on writing!
Forever Deadly,
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Re: Cramp in my Mind
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by Lashing_Tongue on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 11:56:09 PM AEST
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This reminds me of something Dark_and_Cold could have written. I like.
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