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Look of Darkness
Contributed by
tatikaze
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Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 04:32:46 PM in AEST
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Waiting for someone,
who will never know,
That your compassion is real,
and not for show.
Her eyes tell you
of the rough nigts past,
Manipulation of men,
a shadow she'll cast.
A new darkness will come,
intertwined with lies,
All is lost,
When you look into her eyes.
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tatikaze
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2005-11-01 16:32:46]
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Re: Look of Darkness
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by evilfairy on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 09:43:25 PM AEST
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| i like your poem a lot - but the first verse confuses me... is it the same person in the second and thrid you are talking about? |
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Re: Look of Darkness
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 05:01:17 PM AEST
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Aaron a deep and wonderful write. I love the way you have your reader captivated into reading the whole poem.
A new darkness will come,
intertwined with lies,
All is lost,
When you look into her eyes.
Manipulation of man can do this to a person.
Well done on such a great write. Keep penning.
*hugs*
sue |
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