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spent hormones
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 03:24:38 PM in AEST
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searching for meaning for the emontions i hold
trying to express love when my hearts grown so cold
such an easy task when i was very young
life was to simple everything was fun
but now i know humilation along with regret
those are feelings you can never forget
man those were the times when emontions we new
all those raging hormones we couldnt help what we do
but now those feelings have come and all gone
i grew up past purberty and the hair has grown long
now i face a challange i feel i will fall
trying to show love while destroying my wall
this nervous tick as my nails chew away
pulling my mind oh what a day
sweating like bullets she comes sits beside
i fumble my words i wish i could hide
she looks at me strange and giggles away
my oh my this is not my day
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Re: spent hormones
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by Mangos on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 08:46:17 PM AEST
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not silly at all
nice job here |
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Re: spent hormones
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by Lashing_Tongue on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 11:58:33 PM AEST
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A little silly but not bad at all, in a shy sort of schoolboy way.
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Re: spent hormones
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 05:31:47 PM AEST
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Reagan not silly at all. It's just emotions that you wished you could express to the girl you love. Sounds like someones in love.
*hugs*
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Re: spent hormones
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by brokenwings on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 04:17:19 AM AEST
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| nice write |
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