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Limits Of Size
Contributed by
WAE
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Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 02:39:20 PM in AEST
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I want to be so small or so enormous
That I'll be able
To feel the viscoucity of vaccuum
Flying through infinity of space,
Observing other levels of existence.
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WAE
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2005-11-01 14:39:20] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Limits Of Size
(User Rating: 1 ) by Tatikaze on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 09:24:07 PM AEST (User
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It sounds like what I felt when I ate that sugar cube?? Interesting poem |
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Re: Limits Of Size
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lashing_Tongue on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 12:00:47 AM AEST (User
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Excellent job of fitting a deep meaning between so few lines of type.
Best Wishes,
Jackie |
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Re: Limits Of Size
(User Rating: 1 ) by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 10:04:07 PM AEST (User
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This is good. I like it, I think it would be better with a few more lines though.
The idea is very good. I just really wish there was more.
*hugs tons*
Phil xxx |
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