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I'll Burn These Thoughts
Contributed by
ramfire
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Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 12:15:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Flames to my thoughts setting these on fire now.
I’ll burn thy remembrance sending ashes
swirling into great Aquilo’s wind wanting
flames to my thoughts setting these on fire now.
Wine and merry singing chasing thee from
my poor aching mind will light torch putting
flames to my thoughts setting these on fire now.
I’ll burn thy remembrance sending ashes.
Copyright ©
ramfire
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2005-11-01 12:15:42]
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Re: I'll Burn These Thoughts
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by evilfairy on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 09:48:15 PM AEST
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hmmmm....very good.
the lack of punctuation confused me a bit at first, but I take it the poem is to be read in one full swoop of words and thoughts...
i like you concept too. you have to make yourself forget sometimes...pity tho |
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Re: I'll Burn These Thoughts
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by travisk on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 04:22:10 AM AEST
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| nice flow |
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Re: I'll Burn These Thoughts
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by travisk on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 04:22:10 AM AEST
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| nice flow |
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