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Mistranslation
Contributed by
Freak-of-the-Week
on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 09:49:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
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You humiliated me with a promise of betterment...
as I sank into the deep blue chair across from your desk, your fasces of authority,
my eyes exploring your cold, clinical office of paid concern,
exploring everything but your own -- your own set behind dark-rimmed reading glasses,
set upon me, translating me into words, diluting me into words,
degrading me into a page of words -- all symptoms and warning signs --
and then reading me as though I were but a chapter in the DSM-IV.
Brown eyes and hugs didn't phase me...all I wanted was help,
and all I got was you.
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2005-11-01 09:49:16]
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Re: Mistranslation
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by russ-dawg on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 02:50:05 PM AEST
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| ooh cool deep poen chelsea that was awsome! |
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Re: Mistranslation
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by russ-dawg on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 02:50:31 PM AEST
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| oops i ment poem |
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Re: Mistranslation
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by Freak-of-the-Week on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 04:02:26 PM AEST
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| i know what ya meant, ya donk :P |
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Re: Mistranslation
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 11:28:05 AM AEST
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i liked it.. deep...
christina |
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