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The absurdity of god. (look to nothing)
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 04:15:07 AM in AEST
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To begin again.
Consider this.
Look at it objectively.
The night falls surrender to my shadow; the narrow sound of a pigeon reflects over the waters of the moon, my eyes cannot know the sensation.
Search carefully.
Find the sound of my speech.
Desire to forget.
The thought of an aeroplane, crushed beneath smoke and brick,
brings nothing to me.
(Is this my curse?)
I am not afraid to die.
I am not afraid.
I am not
I am afraid
afraid to die.
Despair is a beautiful word, and I desire it.
There is no cause to question this.
Read between the lines.
Ignore the boxes.
Find something that suits you.
Reality and harmony are ill suited.
War is real.
Pain is real.
Life is real.
We Cry.
We cry...
Cry. Cry.
Cry. Our eyes burn the soil.
Don't understand.
Forsake your thought.
Look to nothing.
Look to nothing.
Point your eyes to the inside.
Let life be your thought.
This is the beginning. The fires are closer still.
We cannot understand.
Understand.
Forget. Become benumb.
Seal the sensation.
Try to understand, we are nothing.
A flock of geese spread across a slashed horizon.
Opening to the vast efficacy permeated by the stars, pale knights ride across a black, satin sheet, veiling the corpse of the world. Wolves follow, their howling sorrow piercing the stars with it's song.
This is the absurdity of God.
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iodinelove
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2005-11-01 04:15:07]
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Re: The absurdity of god. (look to nothing)
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 05:20:32 AM AEST
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Very hipnotic write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: The absurdity of god. (look to nothing)
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by Lashing_Tongue on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 07:26:46 AM AEST
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| What, exactly, in this write points to the absurdity of God? The stupidity of humans? I find that a very unsatisfactory argument for the non-existence of a supreme being. But alas, I have no intention of initiating a theological debate. Consider my questions rhetorical. |
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Re: The absurdity of god. (look to nothing)
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 11:52:40 AM AEST
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Life is just a test. Death is where the grades are posted. Let us hope your theory is the right one. There are no make up tests given.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: The absurdity of god. (look to nothing)
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by Gothchyk on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 08:18:40 PM AEST
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| well i love the last stanza, how do you come up w/ these string of words that creates such thoughts and pictures, great job. |
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