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Alchemy
Contributed by
MisTaraReunite
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Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 02:32:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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How to get out from myself
When this ancient city is a mysterious ring
you can`t get out from
without reinventing yourself
and everything around you
The rootless existence
Little butterfly flyin`desperately to the fake light
Copyright ©
MisTaraReunite
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2005-10-31 14:32:55]
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Re: Alchemy
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by Lashing_Tongue on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 03:25:30 PM AEST
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| Very intriguing, I find myself wishing this poem was longer. Still, it stands effectively as it is. |
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Re: Alchemy
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by WAE on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 03:41:16 PM AEST
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I am sorry to say but S1L7 is definitely borrowed, and without it this poem loses any value...
Good luck,
Alex |
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