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Well, What can i say ?
Contributed by
Fenrirs-charm
on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 02:02:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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There are no words for what I wish to say,
For what I see,
For what I think,
Like there are no words, truly for me.
I am me,
And me is thee
And all I wish is to be free
To think and write
What I feel and see
But Alas! If there are no words for me,
Then surely I cant write what I see!
And if what I see in anyway be
A reflection or thought
Or in anyway me,
I cant write what it is I wish to say
And therefore I will go on, day after day.
Not being able to write what I say
For tonight I hope and tonight i pray,
That one day I will find a way,
Where lone thoughts shant go astray,
And I can write what I say,
What I feel,
And what I think.
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Fenrirs-charm
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Re: Well, What can i say ?
(User Rating: 1 ) by flamingblade on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 06:08:11 PM AEST (User
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it is good. like the way you didnt stop when yuo punctuated. I mean you had ! marks i n the middle of the line.
It is an original poem and i do really like it. |
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