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a memo for the lonely
Contributed by
Dizza_13
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Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 06:08:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
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empty eyes and empty mind,
and sense of belonging i never could find,
surronded by people yet still alone,
all these things i feel but no one has known.
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Dizza_13
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2005-10-31 06:08:45]
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Re: a memo for the lonely
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 08:41:13 AM AEST
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| short but powerful and beautifully written. |
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Re: a memo for the lonely
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 03:30:08 AM AEST
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Awesome write.
I can relate.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: a memo for the lonely
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 02:12:21 AM AEST
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So much said in a little amount of words. I can so much relate to your poem. A very well crafted piece of poetry. Well done.
*hugs*
sue |
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Re: a memo for the lonely
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by tiggytom on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 05:48:55 AM AEST
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I agree with the others, Short n to the point, sometimes the best way. I liked this a sense of being alone that we all share although some may pretend otherwise.
Thanks
Tom :) |
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Re: a memo for the lonely
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by annslife777 on
Friday, 6th January 2006 @ 10:02:13 PM AEST
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i love this...great write.
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