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Bold I s My Love
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 01:15:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Bold is my love
for you,
all the windows of Illusion are torn
and shattered,
there are no more secrets
you know
that I want you now.
I see your halo when you smile
and it drives me wild
sensual sensations are thrilling
whenever I
I sense your prescence around.
Something sweet is building to a crescendo...
it ebbs and flows
and I await for it to explode,
I can only moan
as love spins me round and round.
Anticipating kissing your lips
I start to sway
I am in a daze,
I love it when I feel this way
ahh it's so nice....
the sensations are thrilling
and I wanna
melt into you.
Copyright ©
secretwind
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2005-10-31 01:15:33]
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Re: Bold I s My Love
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by emystar on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 01:23:33 AM AEST
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You melted me with the last write. and now I sit and drool. Heck I can't even spell.
Aaaaaahhh, dreming now.
huggs, luv, smiles,
emy
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Re: Bold I s My Love
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by Aquaelius on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 01:41:55 AM AEST
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I like the images that you make me think here. Very nice.
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Re: Bold I s My Love
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by Forever_Now on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 07:42:04 AM AEST
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"I see your halo when you smile"
How good is that. Nice write |
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Re: Bold I s My Love
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 02:14:56 PM AEST
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Nice, very nice! Anticipation is half the fun : )
All the best with this new love interest.
Scorp. |
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