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Ungrateful Prayers
Contributed by
russ-dawg
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Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 10:38:00 PM in AEST
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Dear God,
Hello God I know its been a while, i just haven't had time
but praying to you has been on my mind
i hope you can here cause this is what i need
I need this and that and this and that to satisfy my greed
Dear God,
God something horrid happened to day
i let them see me cry I have always been a strong girl or that’s what i lied
don't let them remember its to hard to bare its the worst that could happen in this life venture
Dear God,
I can't believe it what happened why could he not have lived
was it me did i do it by acting like a fool
yes i think it was all the ungrateful prayers
God forgive me and let me make it up
protect my loved ones and bless them too
thanks for all you've given me but all i need is you
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russ-dawg
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2005-10-30 22:38:00]
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Re: Ungrateful Prayers
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by emystar on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 01:09:26 AM AEST
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I'm so sorry for your losses.
God knows and sees your heart and he luvs you. He understands.
Keep writing.
luv, big huggs,
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Re: Ungrateful Prayers
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by Freak-of-the-Week on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 01:26:28 PM AEST
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| That's really touching, Rusti. Your poems are getting better and better...anything that comes from the heart is effective, and this is no exception! ^_^ |
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