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Contributed by
moon_light
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Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 06:11:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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its time to say good bye
to these feelings that haunt,
me by day and by night.
to be free they fight.
they push and they pull.
and they tare me apart.
they scrap and they shred,
the peaces of my heart.
but today is the end
of these memories
I count as a fiend.
I lock away all I have left.
to protect my heart from theft.
my feet carry me as I run.
I fall apart before your eyes.
apone my knees I cry.
no more,
not now,
never again.
today is the end.
your far behind my now.
I’ve changed my mind.
you have no control.
I’m no longer a little girl.
no more expectations.
I am moving on.
I’m gona be my self.
live the way I want.
like it never happened.
no more playing pretend.
now you will see who
I really am.
today I am free.
Copyright ©
moon_light
... [
2005-10-30 18:11:23]
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Re: free
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 12:53:51 PM AEST
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Yes a most lovely peice of writting as the heart expresses it's voice of liberation, a well crafted poem as well as a feeling of emotional release this poem gives one, very
enjoyabe experience it was u write well very effective . . .
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Re: free
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by hellsfallenangel on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 10:25:09 AM AEST
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hey hun this is a very very good write but u still need to learn how to spell lol hehehe ttyl byebye love u
DEMON |
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Re: free
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by gah_veh on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 06:31:19 PM AEST
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| your good but thats obvious keep up the good work ill comment yours if you comment mine :) |
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Re: free
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by sride686 on
Sunday, 6th November 2005 @ 07:04:12 AM AEST
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This poem was well done and had a
really nice flow to it as you read it.
This poem also says all that’s true
about who you should be. Be free
and be your self for all you can be is
you for everyone else is taken already.
Take care and keep up the writes and
thank you for the comment on my
work it is much appreciated…..Steve |
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