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The Jackal
Contributed by
gwenevere
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Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 05:12:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I am here to guard the tomb of my old master wise
Waiting now to guide his soul and aid him as he flies
To the land of afterlife, where he will reign again
Free from all anxiety, yes free from sadness, pain
There he'll meet his subjects, faithfull one and all
Listening and waiting, for their masters call
Osiris is my master, I his Anubis
Watching ever faithful, after deaths full kiss
Never to disturb him, leave him at his peace
Listen in the moonlight, howls I will release
You will hear me calling, telling all who hear
Jackal and my Pharoah, disturb and you will fear
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gwenevere
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Re: The Jackal
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by ChibiMiroku on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 05:56:24 PM AEST
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Well done!
I liked the theme alot. Favorite line: Watching ever faithful, after death's full kiss.
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Re: The Jackal
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 11:17:49 PM AEST
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a bit too confined for you Ros-
I love how you have marshalled the ideas..
great preception..
your talent is extraordinary-
I long for your work on Camelot-
(but that's jus' me..)
Good work
B
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Re: The Jackal
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 12:45:24 PM AEST
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Nice peice of darkness here Ros, as masterful as your other side and just as
prevalent, dangeriously suspensful and as always, well crafted . . .
Ben |
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Re: The Jackal
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by Sinfullilmissmuppet on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 04:49:42 AM AEST
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hey,
gorgeous
wish i could write my darkness like that
loved it good job
till next time
emz |
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Re: The Jackal
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by wizard on
Monday, 7th November 2005 @ 07:28:08 PM AEST
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another amazing write!
from camelot to egyption tombs...you've got all the bases covered!...
perhaps the roman empire lay in wait to be graced by your historical pen!?!
wiz |
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