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You and I
Contributed by
Adrianna
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Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 04:57:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I missed you
I couldn’t stop thinking about you
I wonder if you feel the same way
You were my first lust
I wonder if I was really yours
You tell me the truth
I wonder why you even bother
You are the same
I wonder if you see the real me anymore
You are still there
I wonder why
Copyright ©
Adrianna
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2005-10-30 16:57:14]
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Re: You and I
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by SkillzWayAboveYours on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 06:00:30 PM AEST
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| its good but you shouldn't have said lust, lust isnt real |
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Re: You and I
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by jessejames on
Saturday, 24th December 2005 @ 01:32:28 PM AEST
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good write and lust is real
you would enjoy work my outlaw_mutiny on this site |
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