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No Superman
Contributed by
TheKid
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Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 12:12:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I am no Superman
I constantly fall
On steady ground
But I continue to crawl
I am no superman
I constantly bleed
Not just from visible wounds
But I always proceed
I am no superman
I constantly cry
From struggles and lost hope
But I continue to try
I am no superman
Far from it indeed
But I never quit
I will always succeed
Copyright ©
TheKid
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2005-10-30 12:12:32]
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Re: No Superman
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by liquidsunshine on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 12:16:00 PM AEST
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I really liked the rhythm of this poem. Really great sentiments, as well. A delightful read, I'll have to visit more of your poetry more often.
Love and peace,
Chelsea |
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Re: No Superman
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by MrJeans on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 01:26:58 PM AEST
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As you should!
A good, positive poem
for us all to draw
inspiration from
Well done
Mr. |
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Re: No Superman
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by SkillzWayAboveYours on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 02:16:43 PM AEST
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| nice |
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Re: No Superman
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by LEMMEN on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 04:07:28 PM AEST
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| Nicw write |
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Re: No Superman
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by jyssvw22 on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 09:38:46 PM AEST
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nice inspirational piece
thanks for sharing that |
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