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my blood tainted blade
Contributed by
sick_n_twisted
on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 01:02:11 AM in AEST
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as I looked at the blade
I thought of you and her together
I cut deep and fast
it started to bleed
more then I thought it would
more then I thought I ever could
the blood fell onto my pants
my heart started beating faster and faster
I started to get really scared
and started crying
"I never meant for it to go this far!"
while holding it
I want you so bad
I cant even explain it
my blood tainted blade tells all
how much I want you..
and all my anguish...
as I look at you and her in a picture
I start to cry
I cant stand the fact that your not mine...
the only thing I can call mine is my blood tainted blade
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2005-10-30 01:02:11]
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Re: my blood tainted blade
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by Lashing_Tongue on
Sunday, 30th October 2005 @ 01:31:58 AM AEST
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| Hmm...my advice to both you and your friend would be this....there's absolutely no point whatsoever to being with anyone if you really want to be with someone else...you'll just create and perpetuate two more empty relationships that, empty as they are, still cause a lot of pain when they come crashing down... |
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Re: my blood tainted blade
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 11:51:51 AM AEST
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Well written deeply felt, all good things in time
(((((SAT))))))
Ben |
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Re: my blood tainted blade
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by angel_eyes70 on
Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 02:42:45 PM AEST
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Awww, I hate it when people say they will never do something badd over a guy, I was in the same position...erm kinda lol but great write!
xxxKimxxx |
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Re: my blood tainted blade
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by angel_eyes70 on
Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 02:42:49 PM AEST
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Awww, I hate it when people say they will never do something badd over a guy, I was in the same position...erm kinda lol but great write!
xxxKimxxx |
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Re: my blood tainted blade
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by angel_eyes70 on
Tuesday, 28th March 2006 @ 02:42:50 PM AEST
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Awww, I hate it when people say they will never do something badd over a guy, I was in the same position...erm kinda lol but great write!
xxxKimxxx |
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