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Please Forgive me
Contributed by
pig_pen2007
on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 09:03:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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If i die today, will all ur meories of me go away.
Where would u b when u hear, will it b one of ur fears.
R will it b just another day of ur past,wondering in ur mind y i left so fast.
I love my family and friends it no lie, I am just tired of the tears in my eyes.
I look to the mirror and lookin back at me, Its not wat i want 2 c.
I want 2 go back 2 a time when i was happy not sad, tat was b4 i knew my daddy was really my stepdad.
I am in so much pain i cant feel, i dk how 2 deal.
There is a knife on the side of me, it and my rist is all i can c.
I no tat u cant c it now but it is the best, just think of it as a test.
Ill b happy again ill b w/ her and him, i can begin 2 c my life startin 2 dim.
Now its time 4 me 2 say goodbye, please dont cry.
I no ur tears wont b real, so just put me in the coffin and in the ground 4 the final seal..
I wont ever 4 get n-e 1, just do 1 thing, PLEASE FORGIVE ME 4 wat i have done...
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Re: Please Forgive me
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 09:09:35 PM AEST
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| I just couldn't get through this man...where are all your words? It's like written in friggen code. c = see, man. Maybe this is just your style and I should shut-up. Peace to you |
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Re: Please Forgive me
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by flamingblade on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 09:59:07 PM AEST
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| well ,unlike someone, i like this a lot. i have lived in orphanages so i know how you feel. and the code as someone calls it, keeps it modern. i can really relate. thanks for posting this. |
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Re: Please Forgive me
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by needs_change on
Monday, 31st October 2005 @ 05:04:56 PM AEST
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i love you shi shi
this is one of my favorite poems that u have written. guess what. u r sittin behind me. hahahaha. hey i bet i get it posted this time |
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