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Together
Contributed by
sprinter27
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Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 08:55:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Look at our photograph
The still frame of our life
Look at us stand there and laugh
Look at us fight through the strife
We fought it Together
Look at that photo
You and I were there
So much we didn’t know
Like that life is that unfair
We fought it Together
Look at our smiles
Together we stood
We stood there for a while
We did what we could
We fought it Together
Look at us in the frame
There you are, behind me
You wiped away my tearstains
I helped you to find life’s key
We fought it Together
Look at our picture,
This picture of best friends
We look like we are pure
Like it will never come to an end
We fought it Together
Look at that photo,
Your arms around me,
So much you didn’t know
So much you couldn’t see
We fought it Together
Look at our still life
When everything froze
And you can’t see the strife
All that is left is our coals
We fought it Together
All we need is flame
But there is nothing to light
And I am all to blame
I was the one who gave up the fight
We fought it Together
We fought it Together
We could’ve made it Together
If only I didn’t leave
Maybe if I was on a leash
But we are lost forever
We’ll be together never
Look at the photo
So much we didn’t know
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sprinter27
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2005-10-29 20:55:45]
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Re: Together
(User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 04:44:44 PM AEST
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But we are lost forever
We’ll be together never
Look at the photo
So much we didn’t know
The last stanza real cuts deep. There is
so much we don’t know and don’t see
and that’s what love is all about. Love is
about growing with your love and
discovering all the things about them
and learning to love the good and the
bad. This was a good write and very
emotion like a photo journal of your life
with your love. Very well done and I’m
glad I took the time to read it. Take care….Steve |
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Re: Together
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by Misunderstood_gurl on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 12:46:38 PM AEST
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i really liked this poem. some ppl do just give up on love...but if you ever need to talk...im here for you.
-Jessica |
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