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in & out
Contributed by
Dizza_13
on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 07:21:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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loving, love out
its lost all meaning,
breathing, breathe out
ive lost all feeling,
screaming, scream out
there is no healing,
bleeding, bleed out
but thats just living.
Copyright ©
Dizza_13
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2005-10-29 07:21:17]
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Re: in & out
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by guiltycircles on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 07:11:54 PM AEST
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| well written, short but heartbreaking, really felt the emotion, well done |
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Re: in & out
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 07:17:34 PM AEST
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It really does explain it, great job, pleasure reading.
-Cassy |
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Re: in & out
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by Sinfullilmissmuppet on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 08:21:21 PM AEST
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Hey,
emotion!!!
very very good
liked the last lines
till next time
emz |
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