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a hearts journey to new love,
Contributed by
brokenwings
on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 05:48:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I didn't want to need you,
but i need you now,.
I didn't want to love you,
but the feeling grew any how.
I don't want to lose you
but i feel you slipping away,
i don't want to miss you
so i'll beg you to stay
as the waves of my heart
crash upon the shore,
my tears fall like snow in july
and i love you so much more,
the roses don't bloom,
and the trees all die,
as my world slips into gloom
because u had to lie,
you broke my heart
you left me alone
now i find a new start,
and an empty home,
the weeping willow no longer cries
and the winds of your love have stopped
and the love i found has no lies,
and my new heart has dropped
sands flow thru my hands,
as i dream of distant lands,
so i say this in one last try,
i love you and goodbye,
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brokenwings
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2005-10-29 05:48:38]
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Re: a hearts journey to new love,
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 06:22:04 AM AEST
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This was great, beautiful. I do wish you'd put in a bit more about the transition, though. But that's just me. I really liked the flow of this one, how all your 'pictures' fit into words.
Well done.
Take care.
David |
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Re: a hearts journey to new love,
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by jheng on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 08:08:48 AM AEST
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| i love ur poem & i can truly relate to it .... it just had my heart broken, hrs ago ... |
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