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Don't Let The Sun Go Down On Me
Contributed by
Elisabeth
on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 01:37:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Remembering that I am speechless
Still cannot be seen through
Desires of purity, hatred of regret
Fake world slit my throat
Are you threatening me?
Child-like happiness
Drug infected mind
Undying love
Falling so behind
Benevolent creations
Bereaved of relief
Basic training
Forced belief
Pagan laws
Mordacious fears
Sickly morals
Counterfeit tears
You may love your fiend
Just don't let the sun go down on me
Copyright ©
Elisabeth
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2005-10-29 01:37:16]
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Re: Don't Let The Sun Go Down On Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 02:51:44 AM AEST
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WoW an absolutely well detailed write. I like your style of writing. You can pen down your emotions well. Keep up the great work.
May the sun always shine brightly for you.
*hugs*
Sue |
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Re: Don't Let The Sun Go Down On Me
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 03:42:33 AM AEST
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| Undying love shows here in your work |
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Re: Don't Let The Sun Go Down On Me
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by SeanMcHaney on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 03:50:54 AM AEST
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| Very well done, thank you for sharing. |
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