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speechless
Contributed by
socialmisfit
on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 10:29:06 PM in AEST
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so many fears,
so many barriers
between me and you
i dont know what to do
speechless is all i am
every time i wish to speak
it doesn't seem i can
If I could find the words,
I'd tell you,
if I could bare my heart I would...
But you catch me speechless,
impaired
and I only yearn to speak.
When the words come to me,
you'll see,
that I only meant to say...
so many things...
but most of all
can i just say i love you?
but no, your smile has stumped me again
and i let you walk away
with those simple words still locked inside my head
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2005-10-28 22:29:06]
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Re: speechless
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by mylady on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 02:18:17 AM AEST
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| It nice like it...mylady |
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Re: speechless
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 03:12:17 AM AEST
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A very well written and presented poem. I like your style of writing. It's the worst situation to be in when the words just don't come out. Good luck and I hope things work out for you.
Keep penning.
*hugs*
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Re: speechless
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 03:50:34 AM AEST
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| sad, but sweet |
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Re: speechless
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 05:07:59 PM AEST
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Ahhh...it's a wonderful kind of speechless though, no? I'm sure when the time is right, you'll find the words. Well expressed write (no pun intended :P)
It's sweet in a way too, just because the emotions are so believable, and we've all been there at one point or another. Good luck with her : )
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Re: speechless
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by miyake on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 09:24:09 PM AEST
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| I feel this could have been written in a different way to capture the reader better. It does convey excellently how one can be lost for words when in love. I think its a good poem |
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