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Killer
Contributed by
xoxpaperxheartxox
on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 10:23:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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they tell you they love you
but you see the lies in their eyes
they hurt cause you pain on the inside
you start to believe that somehow everyone is to good for you
your cuts get deeper
no one notices
your pain hurts more
no one cares
you start to fade
into the depths of darkness
until your praying,hoping for death
but it will not come
STOP
this is not love
love should not hurt like this
this is pain and you need to get rid of pain
do not cut
do not think
move on and try again you will find her and if not
Try Harder
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xoxpaperxheartxox
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2005-10-28 22:23:08]
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Re: Killer
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 03:17:28 AM AEST
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A heartfelt message you bring across with your write. Nobody should ever cut themselves under any circumstances. A great write. I hope it will help others in a situation like that.
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Re: Killer
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by The_Unknown on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 02:26:48 AM AEST
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); I could never bring myself to cut. I have tried but couldn't. felt it almost, but couldn't bring myself to do it all the way. but I feel exactly how you describe.
how? how am I supposed to just move on? move on from all the pain in my life?
*x*anonymously~here*x* |
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