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Just Me

Contributed by crazy on Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 09:07:22 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



im the bottom of my gut'i have that feeling again
of hate,lonlyness,anger,sadness
how do i make it stop
all the thoughts in my head
just seem to run together

my pain and misery
i will try and control
in other ways
tocut or commit suicide
no on will ever understand me

i hate my life
i hate how i look
all i know is hate

depression is my best friend
always there
telling me how to feel
what to say
how to act

they tell me to stop
i like to pop them in the ******* head
tell themall just to shut the **** up
you dont know any thing about me
dont tell me what to do you *****


always having anger
of different personalities
will i ever let them out
to show what i think
or do i keep my hidden image
never wanting them to find
out about what ive done
or what i think of doing
i try to tell but my fear
is holding me back
i love to be myself by myself
depression for me is ok
because its how i feel

to die would be
the best thing
will anyone notice
that im gone
does anyone care about me
for real
what will come after i die
nothing but maggots
eating out my guts and eyes
there i lay forgotten
invisable to everyone and everything
being devowered by maggots

10/ 28/ 05




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Re: Just Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Mild_Tempest on Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 11:35:25 PM AEST
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"depression is my best friend
always there
telling me how to feel
what to say
how to act"
I know how that feels. I hope you feel better, if not you can always talk to me. :)
-Will


Re: Just Me (User Rating: 1 )
by upomik on Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 09:09:41 PM AEST
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ha....that's awesome! that's exactly how i feel everyday. good write


Re: Just Me (User Rating: 1 )
by romance_pyro on Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 09:23:16 PM AEST
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Nice poem and very emotional. Deep. Maybe you will find that guy that makes you smile and you cant get rid of it and take your depression away...




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