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So Different
Contributed by
Breezer08
on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 08:24:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I see my reflection in your eyes
I can't escape these fireflies
There's something more to that blue
Something I already knew
I need to get away
Closed eyes don't see the open
And open eyes don't see the closed
But somehow you see me
With your eyes wide shut
I need to get far away
I'm falling
Suffication, choking me
Small spaces, killing me
I'm falling
Am I your fall back
Or will you be there to catch me
See me
More than you want to see
Hold me
Like you'll never let go
Push me
Like you're testing me
But watch me fall
Right back to you
Laugh at me
And I'll laugh too
Cry for me
And I'll cry for you
Yell at me
And I'll listen to your words
Kill me painfully
And I'll still be loving you
Mark me as bad
And I'll mark you as good
Call me a whore
But only with you
Sell me cheap
And I'll say your priceless
Look at me
And I'll kiss you back
Say I'm dark
And I'll call you my light
Promise me
And I'll break your honesty
Slice my wrists
But you are my knife
Ignore me
And I'll adore you
Hit me hard
And I'll hit you back
Come to me closely
And I'll pull you closer
Speak to my softly
And I'll yell at you
Touch me gently
And I'll turn you on
Rise in my east
And I'll set in your west
Be my passion
And I'll stay your secret
Brighten my mornings
And I'll darken your nights
Say "I love you"
And I'll love you more
Nothing in this world can make you see
Nothing will be able to stop me
For you and I contrast
But opposites attract
Cause no ones perfect
Copyright ©
Breezer08
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2005-10-28 20:24:43]
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Re: So Different
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 03:36:41 AM AEST
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A very well written and expressed poem. You've detailed your emotions well. Keep penning and I hope thins work out for you.
*heartfelt hugs 4 u*
Sue |
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Re: So Different
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 03:56:13 AM AEST
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| Poem expressed so well. Nice! |
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Re: So Different
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by Chilibear on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 07:26:41 PM AEST
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WOW! This was such an amazing poem... So much feeling. Keep it up.
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