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The Day Everything Went Wrong
Contributed by
olddarkme
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Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 09:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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I murmured not a single sound
cause as it was my car broke down.
I tried to fix it with the jack
but slipped and landed on my back.
Under my breath I began to talk.
To a local store I began to walk.
On the way while feeling low
I kicked a rock and stubbed my toe.
When I got to the store I saw
a man in the process of breaking the law.
He shot his gun and I was in the way.
A perfect end to the rest of my day.
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olddarkme
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2003-01-21 09:40:00]
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Re: The Day Everything Went Wrong
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by Opium on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 09:47:14 AM AEST
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| I missed the humurous part ...teacher. |
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Re: The Day Everything Went Wrong
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 10:24:03 AM AEST
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| I read all you have posted here...I must say I do like your poetry. nice rhymes and rythms. It's clear you have poetic talent. I do wish however..that you wouldnt be so harsh in your comments to other poets who may not have your abilities. People write from the heart...and the heart doesnt always have perfect meter. Just a comment...not trying to be a jerk at all. I enjoyed your writes and keep up the good work. Larry |
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Re: The Day Everything Went Wrong
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by rustygrl33 on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 12:00:48 PM AEST
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| that really can catch someone totally off guard.. i think we take life's blessings for granted.. good write |
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Re: The Day Everything Went Wrong
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by roisin on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 12:30:08 PM AEST
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seems always to come in 3's...3 goods, 3 bads..glad you found the humour...
rosie |
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