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Deterrent
Contributed by
weepingprophet
on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 02:06:29 PM in AEST
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trade me for a minute
for an hour
for a day
trade me for infinity
give me away
.. I belong to you
a sacred gift
and bought...
with desire
you hold the world together
pull it apart
i'm nothing better
worth nothing more
than these scars
you're appointed to call
to call me what you shall
i am..yours
you hold me
pull me
apart, together
you are everything better
than my scars
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2005-10-28 14:06:29]
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Re: Deterrent
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 02:48:17 PM AEST
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would be a cool song interesting write
r.m.wilder |
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Re: Deterrent
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by Leoricx on
Saturday, 7th October 2006 @ 08:04:53 AM AEST
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a sacred gift
and bought...
with desire
Very nice. The whole thing conveys a strong emotion. Almost bordering on dependency...
Nicely written
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Re: Deterrent
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by Uncertain_Oblivion on
Friday, 20th October 2006 @ 01:49:26 PM AEST
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| I found this to be quite stunning. I really enjoyed reading it. Yu should be proud of yourelf. |
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Re: Deterrent
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th October 2006 @ 08:01:29 PM AEST
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| This is a very nice poem. I like it |
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