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I bury myself...
Contributed by
zealousnatalie
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Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 11:28:02 AM in AEST
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I bury myself today
My eyes peek to see real life
The life that plays before me is a lie
Hiding myself away-bury myself in shame
What is there to life but lies that blame?
I see myself- this bleak winter has got me weak
I slide and hide behind these walls- am I the sheep?
Hide myself away- bury myself in shame
I ask myself- "what is there to hate?"
Self hatred is my name
I cry and die
Tonight self hatred is my name....
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2005-10-28 11:28:02]
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Re: I bury myself...
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by Lin54 on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 01:16:34 PM AEST
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What is real life--usually life that we can't see and may not want to see. This world's life slings pain our way constantly and a wall of defense is sometimes a barrier of safety.
In this world--I can't find much about myself to like--but then I look and find a unique person called me--that doesn't have to be like anyone else--and with that I find comfort.
Enjoyed what you had to say and been there.
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Re: I bury myself...
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 05:34:17 PM AEST
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Truly an emotive piece, and well conveyed in so few words. You have talent as a writer, and I hope you continue to develop your skills, and hone your thoughts and emotions. Nicely done! I enjoyed this read.
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