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Un named
Contributed by
Sinfullilmissmuppet
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Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 06:56:05 AM in AEST
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The diamond sits in ice surrounding
Thick as steel, cold as glass
The diamond sits and stares
My nails scratch the enduring flesh
My tears burn its unblemished facade
My arms wrap its cold embrace
I want to understand,
I want to touch
I want to warm I want to comfort
Maybe I’m being selfish using diamonds to replace
Inner turmoils and problems with a distraction
I cant replace
I want to be able to hold
The hot tears run
Copyright ©
Sinfullilmissmuppet
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2005-10-28 06:56:05]
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Re: Un named
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by enigma on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 10:35:15 AM AEST
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...you captured the pain...twelve years and she grew farther and farther away...Santana's song with the lyrics, "give me your heart, make it real, or just forget about it..."
"...cold as glass," "Thick as steel," "diamond sits in ice," "cold embrace," "I want," "I want," "I want," "I want," "I want..." These phrases worked right in to me...
Your poem nicely distills what it would take ten thousand words to describe...
Good job
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Re: Un named
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by hellsfallenangel on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 01:44:02 AM AEST
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this is a very good write alot of emotion went into this i can tell
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