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Little Rebecca
Contributed by
strider
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Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 03:10:41 AM in AEST
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Little Rebecca remember railed roads
Alice alleges attack on all
that brave or breeze beside this bale
it is said seven sad spirits split skulls
of offensive orphans of hoax offspring
Little Rebecca remember our orphaned homes
Copyright ©
strider
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2005-10-28 03:10:41]
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Re: Little Rebecca
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by enigma on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 10:43:14 AM AEST
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...uncertain about what not to say...I've probably said too much already...
...keep it up...
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Re: Little Rebecca
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by WAE on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 01:40:06 PM AEST
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Hmmm, what's the message though?
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Re: Little Rebecca
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by Shade_ on
Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 11:14:58 AM AEST
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A beautiful abstract.
Now this , to me, is poetry.
Your grammar needs some work though.
But I adore this.
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