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Picture With A Twist
Contributed by
jilted
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Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 01:21:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Im going to paint a picture
A picture with a twist
I'll paint ít with a razor blade
I'll paint it on my wrist
A'nd when i paint my picture
A fountain will appear
And down that flowing river
My pain will dissappear
Copyright ©
jilted
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2005-10-28 01:21:20]
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Re: Picture With A Twist
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 02:03:56 AM AEST
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| good write! |
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Re: Picture With A Twist
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 06:15:57 AM AEST
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Forget it. So many other people have 'shared' this with us already, its beginning to get rather ridiculous.
http://www.puttocks.com/modules.php?name=News&file=article&sid=76669
http://www.puttocks.com/modules.php?name=News&file=article&sid=25296
http://www.puttocks.com/modules.php?name=News&file=article&sid=75188
http://www.puttocks.com/modules.php?name=News&file=article&sid=78744
http://www.puttocks.com/modules.php?name=News&file=article&sid=53398
http://www.puttocks.com/modules.php?name=News&file=article&sid=12534
http://www.puttocks.com/modules.php?name=News&file=article&sid=78891
At least you were honest about this submission, whereas the others listed here (i'm sure there are hundreds more on the site search ~ those are only the first page's results), but I reckon enough people have had their all the pictures they'd ever want twisting out of this plagiarised-to-hell poem.
Try creating something of your own. That's what you signed up for, isn't it?
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Re: Picture With A Twist
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 06:19:20 AM AEST
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| **whereas the others listed here weren't. |
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Re: Picture With A Twist
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by blue_angel on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 01:07:52 PM AEST
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oooh that is awesome. i love how its short but its so... whats the word... GOOD! lol i really like the flow of this... how it rhymes and goes so smoothly.
awesomeness...
hUgZ...---> jennie* |
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Re: Picture With A Twist
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by visualizing_life on
Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 02:08:26 PM AEST
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i like your poem but ive heard it many times before...dont afraid to be original
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