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On the Wings of Angels
Contributed by
olddarkme
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Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 08:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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On gossimer wings from the brightening sky.
A breath of life where angels fly.
A beacon on the horizon vast
if triumphant victory fails to last.
The clash of sounds with fervor from
the forgotten fields where battles won.
The radiant joy of heaven's run
to soar again over the setting sun.
In blazing fire and frigid ice.
In creatures completely devoid of vice.
From the catacombs where devil's flee,
the sweetest sounds of melody.
Copyright ©
olddarkme
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2003-01-21 08:40:00]
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Re: On the Wings of Angels
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 09:36:24 AM AEST
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| awesome write, yes and very timeless, thanks for sharing this one |
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Re: On the Wings of Angels
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 09:48:46 AM AEST
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| I so enjoyed this peice really well done! Christina |
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Re: On the Wings of Angels
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 09:51:11 AM AEST
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| this poem lacks a subject and a meaning, you just looked up few words from here and there and ...a so called poem. But keep writing, you'll learn soon |
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Re: On the Wings of Angels
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by Ronald on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 09:52:50 AM AEST
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| Wow! Wonderful!! Everything about this poem is simply beautiful! |
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Re: On the Wings of Angels
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 04:53:34 PM AEST
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| This poem is beautiful ... very nice R&R - it flows so well. |
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Re: On the Wings of Angels
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by Arty_Sydney on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 02:10:05 PM AEST
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this poem seems very like the one i wrote when i was 14 called 'ghost' it seems to depend on the last word in each sentence...
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Re: On the Wings of Angels
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by Arty_Sydney on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 02:13:17 PM AEST
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| this poem is very like the one i wrote when i was 14 years old called 'ghost' . it seems the flow of the poem dependa on the last word in each sentence |
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