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I Hate the Fact
Contributed by
VampryssCherry
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Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 09:11:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I hate the fact that Im alone again.
I hate the fact that it feels weird when you arent around.
I hate the fact that I cant sleep without you.
I hate the fact that the fact that youre the last thing I think of.
I hate the fact that youre the first thing I think of.
I hate the fact that I dont feel like "one of the girls."
I hate the fact that I feel like Im watching them.
I hate the fact that I keep thinking that Ive just seen you.
I hate the fact that I talk about you all the time.
I hate the fact that I cant stop thinking about you.
I hate the fact that you make me forget my past.
I hate the fact that when you hold me, I feel safe.
I hate the fact that I miss you more than I can say.
I hate the fact that I care about you.
I hate the fact that I cant hate you.
And I hate the fact that I love you...
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VampryssCherry
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2005-10-27 21:11:30]
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Re: I Hate the Fact
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by Vampire_Slander on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 09:17:03 PM AEST
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Another hit, you should give your self more credit.. I like your work and I can't wait to see more. Great Job.
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Re: I Hate the Fact
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by Jyssvw on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 09:33:33 PM AEST
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this was good. strong.
it gets better with time
nice write |
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Re: I Hate the Fact
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by vampyrekiss on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 10:03:12 PM AEST
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this is really good :)
vampyre |
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Re: I Hate the Fact
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 29th October 2005 @ 05:28:12 PM AEST
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I like this....While it's not altogether poetic, it is a great emotional spill, and a heartfelt rant. We've all been here before, and it sucks. I hope it felt good to release this onto the page. Nice expression; keep it up!
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Re: I Hate the Fact
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 03:08:08 AM AEST
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well done
nice release of a deep inner emotion |
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Re: I Hate the Fact
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 02:13:11 AM AEST
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| nice poem. |
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